Hi Guys,
I am not a poet but its my first attempt in poetry. It is one of the good way for utilization of quarantine time. You can curse the situation or can make best utilization of this time. Everyone has their viewpoint on this situation but rather than complaining why not utilize this time. Had seen so many creativity by people on web and inspired with them so got self indulge in some activities which can help to relax the mind in the lockdown period.
Though already mentioned that I am trying my hands in poetry for the first time so it would be appreciated to get some of your valuable and honest reviews from you guys.
My collection of words is about the positive and untold aspects of the present situation caused by Coronavirus. So here it is..
” परिंदों ने नया आसमान है देखा, वक्त वक्त की बात है यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा।
इंसान बंद है कैद में, पक्षियों ने अपना नया जहान है देखा।
न कर नाज़ ऐ बंदे, कब तेरे हस्ती मीट जाएगी-
यह कहता एक इंसान है देखा।
क्या अजब गजब हालात हैं, आसमान और नीला, पानी का मीठा स्वाद है-
यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा।
प्रकार्ति से बड़ा नहीं इंसान है, न ज़मीन अपनी न आसमान है-
यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा ।
खामोश है सड़कें और गलिया, क्यू डरता अब इंसान है-
यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा।
कब जानेगा अपने गुनाहों को, कब सीखेगा अपनी गलतियों से-
यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा।
मैंने अपने आस पास हर इंसान को देखा, अब इंसान को इंसानियत की कदर डालते हुए देखा-
यह कहता हुआ इंसान है देखा।
इंसानियत के फूलों को पिरोते हुए देखा, मैंने अपने अंदर एक नए सुन्दर इंसान को देखा।
इंसान को देखा , इंसान को देखा।
Tell me about you guys ? What new hobby you have started or what habit you have opt to kill the time?
These are beautiful life stating the current situation ironically…I am glad I came across this post.
I loved your Hindi writing Gurjeet it is so deep and impactful. I have learnt housework in this lockdown
I am not well read in Hindi but j think this is about the situation we face now.
Perfect. Very well written and just suitable to current situation. Keep writing.
Wow. This is beautiful. Does not seem to be your first attempt. You should write more of this.
Beautiful poem Gurjeet. I love to paint. I am trying to revive my painting skills a during these days
Beautiful poem Gurjeet! You should definitely explore this medium more often!
Thank u dear, I am not confident in this.